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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LnswM69K5s0

What do you lot think, focus on edit and structure more than quality cus im just dl the hd components atm so cant use em for this clip.

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Not bad at all. The music seems to dominate it a bit too much, but that might be just me.

For your next test, try messing around with transition effects, etcetera. Blurs, hue changes, etcetera.

I recommend looking at the main trailer for Black Mesa Source for some transition inspiration:


Watch this video on Youtube.

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Yeah Yeah , im doing a nanoclip now, gonna do a quake transition in sync with the multikill

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Terrible player, terrible edit. horrible syncing. bad colour, bad music. Bad map. Bad game.

:( people like you shouldn't be on youtube.

Nah, I liked it :). I don't like fancy effects, some general cleaning up in some areas and it would be nice :D. Getting better ^^

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Wynney wrote:
Terrible player, terrible edit. horrible syncing. bad colour, bad music. Bad map. Bad game.

:( people like you shouldn't be on youtube.


This :P

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Skillers wrote:
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Terrible player, terrible edit. horrible syncing. bad colour, bad music. Bad map. Bad game.

:( people like you shouldn't be on youtube.


This :P


clearly trolling. I'm contacting the administrator.

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Hai, so I herd you had a problem?

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There's a guy in this thread trolling :(

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Hmm, I see what you mean.

I'll just ban the "Wynney" troll nub then.

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Clearly that Frank GW bloke tbh

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Some transitions would be nice, and the music is FUCKING SPOT ON

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