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I havent finished, this post isn't complete but im running out of time.

It was dark, again, Stephanie noticed this happen when it was night time. As she sat on the pavement between her school and the busy road that ran parallel to its gates she wondered why she hadn't given up and gone home yet,She assumed it was the ever dwindling hope that her parents cars would appear from nowhere, stop and picker her up. She had lost track of time too, after she counted to seven-thousand-nine-hundred-and-forty-three and back she had given up. If anyone had remembered it she might have had that watch she wanted for her birthday. She had a pin and probably a pair of broken headphones in her bag, there was a puddle with a leaf already in it, all she need was a stick and she would have a primitive sun dial, but all that information was useless, It was dark.

"Alright, Fuck it" she said as she stood, turned and walked down the street. She didn't normally talk to her self, but Stephanie thought talking to yourself was probably on of those things that ought to be done, just not overdone. she oughtn't know that it took an hour to walk from her school in Hardwicke through some fields to her house in Swindon, but she guessed it was one of life's little annoyances. her school ends at 3:30, she gets home at 4:30ish when she walks thus an hour, anyone caught pointing out that she hasn't a watch will be shot

(paragraph on the walk home that describes the character)

As Stephanie got home she dumped her bag and shoes on the hallway with everyone else's.
"Steph, is that you?" her mother called from the kitchen.
Knowing how the conversation would go Stephanie replied "yeah mum, I'm home"
"Where were you? I was worried" asked her mother as she walked into the hallway
"I was at school, waiting for you" replied Stephanie sounding more tired than angry
"You said you were going to a friends house" her mother stated
"That was yesterday"
"Oh, sorry, look ill make it up to you on your birthday"
"Last week"
(finish non dialogue section of this paragraph)

(find proper places and not pick random names on google maps on closer inspection hardwicke looks like a manor, im not too sure also 1 hours is believable its roughly 2 miles but I must mention the m5 (find a bridge or something) also looking through google earth for more info shows that the place is roughly ten miles from the TCHS LAN an odd coincidence but i may have the wrong area)




Authors notes: sept 18th Bday, born 1993 thus starting GCSE now, sir name as of yet unknown. users who go snooping will be shot.

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1. what is this?

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